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DHM- 01-20-2006
New Story
I'm an author who has been overlooked, shut down, and probably never heard of. I wil be writting a novel in this forum by posting about a page a day. Please give me your honest feed back and any constructive criticism is welomed warmly. This novel is book one of "The Dark Knight" trilogy. Book one: Rise of The Dark Knight.

MorbidDesire- 01-20-2006

Sounds very interesting. I'll be keeping an eye on this page, and I hope other people will decide to read your story as well.

zell142- 01-23-2006

it does sound intresting!! hope the installments come out quickly

DHM- 01-26-2006

It should start shortly...I have about a paragraph to finish for the first page.... Tomorrow or the next day...yeah that sounds right.

DHM- 01-26-2006

hurluffurggrolshtllosssmlllolulseftfshshthss ...sorry...had to vaomit....I'm nervous abou the story...Give your honest opinions and all feed back is greatly appreciated!

halon00b- 01-29-2006

i'm sure it'll be interesting! i'm already anxious to read it!!!

MorbidDesire- 01-30-2006

No need to be nervous, I'm sure with your talent (from what I know of you at least) that it's bound to be good.

zell142- 01-31-2006

yeah nerviousness from u is exspected but you over come that after a while so just to encourage you that should be great

DHM- 02-01-2006

I wish it would hurry up...i realy want to know if it's good, or trash...

rick-james!- 02-01-2006

i dont know what you guys are talkin about but.....ok

MorbidDesire- 02-01-2006

The website will more than likely be updated this weekend. It may not be, though, so don't get your hopes up too high.

DHM- 02-01-2006

ok....*pulls hopes down from sky* i'm good now...don't forget to give all honest feedback....it's very important to me

MorbidDesire- 02-01-2006

I'll be sure to be brutally honest

rick-james!- 02-01-2006

mmmtss!mmmtss!mmmtss!mmmtss! beatbox baby!!!

DHM- 02-02-2006

Dude....refrain from jizzing on my story.....

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